Preliminary Feedback

Upon watching each other's Preliminary tasks, we all received feedback on our productions. In this blog, I will be discussing my feedback.

Overall I was quite pleased with my final piece of work however, I do recognise that there is always room for improvement. A common aspect that was mentioned for improvement in my feedback was "develop your production" meaning I need to add more information to what I am saying. This was not something I had realised however it was something that made sense to me once it was pointed out and explained. This can be done with having a point to make or attempting to answer a question during the documentary. My problem with this is that I did not really have a question to answer during my preliminary task meaning I often did not have a specific list of things that needed to be mentioned. 

All in all, I am pleased with the advice I was given as it has opened my eyes to an issue I was not seeing before.