Beginning, he is stuck on a boat
Middle, getting to know the characters
2nd Middle, how he got there, his troubles
End, back on the boat,
Ed: Hello ladies and gentlemen... raise your hand if you can swim, now keep your hand up if you can swim while being pulled down. Orlando was a normal kid, everything was normal, so why should he be left petrified from a knock on the door? He wakes up on a boat, but why?
Lorry: Orlando sproggins enjoyed his sport, had a vast friendship group that many people envied him for... He was captain of the 1sts rugby, top of his classes, had the most beatufil girlfriend in school. But he was only human therefor had his hammartya... his tendency to drown in his own self confidence and he never fails to pull others under with him. One peer in particular.
ED: for the first time in Orlando sprigging life he's faced with the feeling of being dragged down by someon else.
Lorry: his horrific self inflicted consequences haunt him...
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